Feedback From Part 1

Although we were a little disappointed with our mark, we got some great feedback, and also some great hints and tips for what we need to improve on next time.

Evaluate

• Make sure we show that we have understood the text and its context and not just say what we do and dont like about it.
• Distinguish what we can use from the text and what is no good to us and be selective.
• How this text will appeal to the consumer, what this text has that other don't and what makes it so special.

Research

Make sure that we are researching into more texts 

• Journals
• Magazines
• Consumer Trends
• WGSN
• Marketing Week
• Whats Popular on YouTube/Itunes
• Top 25 apps/videos.

Be More Consistant.

• Annotate Slides yet have a good balance of images and text.
• Make the end product consistant eg fonts titles.
• Use a select range of fonts that work well together
• Come up with a theme that works and stick to it.

We are going to consider all of these elements in this next stage of the project.